Wednesday, December 22, 2010

oh kid me not!

when i say a day is
dull,
wet,
gloomy,
blue,
cold,
cruel,
infuriatingly unfair,

am i simply looking away from the sun?


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2 comments:

  1. sneezestarApril 13, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    What if you like
    dull
    wet
    gloomy
    blue
    cold
    cruel
    infuriatingly unfair days ?

    Need the sun even exist?


    I like your poems.

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  2. jhusilikiraApril 13, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    I need the allegorical sun from time to time.

    But the real sun - I need ALWAYS.

    And it hasn't shown up here in days. Senseless clouds and rain everywhere. dull. wet. gloomy. blue. cold. cruel. I can't even begin to describe how unfair.


    But your last line is keeping me a little warm.

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